From your mom, dadi and nani
On my first birthday, after I went away,
I know you will be miserable and sad,
But today I have something else to say,
I hope that would make each one glad.
Let me start with the eldest of you,
Mona’s husband our dearest Maharaj,
I always loved you, my son Linoo,
You were always the jewel in my taj.
Mona, you have always been a daughter,
That can make any mother proud,
We have shared together tons of laughter,
Sometimes subdued, at others loud.
I am not going to write for you much,
The one nearest, my dear son Ravi,
I know you can write anything as such,
After all, you were born (to me) a kavi.
That brings me to my bahu, my Lyn,
Who shared with me endless love,
I hope that brings, on your face, a grin,
When I shower blessings from above.
JP, my darling, my little “Sweet”,
You were always closest to my heart,
You were there whenever we could meet,
Even death can’t make us apart.
Chuck you came into our lives gently,
I really adored your attitude and skill,
You are smart physically and mentally,
Having you in family was always a thrill.
Let me turn to first of grand and great-grand,
Ankur, Simran, Mohiraa and Noor,
Anywhere they went on sea and land,
Nani‘s house was never too door (away).
Tiny and Ippy are my favourite darlings,
Can’t describe the joy of being with them,
Whenever they visited I developed wings,
One a diamond and the other a gem.
Samira and Arjun filled me with elation,
When they tied their knot together,
I would have given them great celebration,
If they had visited Kandaghat ever.
That brings me to my youngest grandson,
One and only Arun-the-great,
There is no one like you under the sun,
You were really worth the wait.
Birthdays are special, I know,
You’d have wanted me to be there,
But look for me wherever you go,
And you’d find me everywhere.
And I would be waving at you, as always,
When you’d leave Whispering Winds, my abode,
Then, waiting for you to return on important days,
My eyes forever fixed on the road.
A great birthday gift from your mom – now the divine soul.Feel proud .
Very emotional and full of feelings. Well written. Happy birthday auntie
Dear Ravi, The idea itself is so unique- the first birthday after D day. And the execution is most wonderful. Could be my mother writing from above with just names changed. Best wishes for your writings. Still reading ‘ …’Bastard….’ – one at a time. Amen.
Wg Cdr Rajinder Jassal.
Thank you, Sir. Regards
Thank you.
Thank you so much, Sir for being encouraging of my efforts. Regards
This last line did something to me that I cannot describe: My eyes forever fixed on the road….. Even the name of the dwelling is poetic: Whispering Winds: How beautiful!
Thank you, Asokan. If you ever come to Kandaghat, you will get those lines true impact. Read about it here:
http://www.sunbyanyname.com/2012/03/31/home-is-where-the-heart-is-kandaghat-in-shimla-hills/
Beautiful. The last line brought tears in my eyes.
Yes Mom …. you ever said this … can see your eyes looking ….. all who are entering the WW gate.
Thank you Jaswsnt
Speaks volumes of her love and concern for each member of her family penned in a very touching and affectionate manner.👏👏👏👏👏
Thank you Anil Sharma Sir.